Ya I don't know nothing about making beats but I dig your stuff it reminds me of classifieds shit kind of I'm just getting into rapping so maybe ill use 1 of ur beats or something for a track because this shits tight
Of cause dude!! good luck in you rec a thanks a lot)
I think the lyrics could use more work like try writing about events in your life and things that matter to you.
You have a great voice too and all the instruments fit in nicely.
hey hey, this isn't totally useless... it's a fuckin 9 after all...
to be fair, these are half the lyrics of the original version, which would have been twice as long. at the time i cared about song length... but, to be blunt, this song IS about something that matters to me, a dead friend. i just hide the real meaning behind all this imagery. at the time of writing it (about 6 yrs after the friend's sudden death) this was still all i could say about her, about how i felt... about how i was dealing with it, still... and it came out in this dreamy super-saturated metaphor, with so many esoteric and/or freudian symbols, he'd have a field day... now if i wrote this song i'd probably go the other direction with it, turn it into a story about some other girl, her death and 'walking as she flies,'
etc... anyway, thanks for the compliments on the vox and instrumentation, much appreciated, as well as the favoriting.
Really, nice! I like it!
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