TheThinWhale's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Terra Angelica]

Lyrics

I think the lyrics could use more work like try writing about events in your life and things that matter to you.

You have a great voice too and all the instruments fit in nicely.

Favorited.

Gunshy responds:

hey hey, this isn't totally useless... it's a fuckin 9 after all...
damn
to be fair, these are half the lyrics of the original version, which would have been twice as long. at the time i cared about song length... but, to be blunt, this song IS about something that matters to me, a dead friend. i just hide the real meaning behind all this imagery. at the time of writing it (about 6 yrs after the friend's sudden death) this was still all i could say about her, about how i felt... about how i was dealing with it, still... and it came out in this dreamy super-saturated metaphor, with so many esoteric and/or freudian symbols, he'd have a field day... now if i wrote this song i'd probably go the other direction with it, turn it into a story about some other girl, her death and 'walking as she flies,'
etc... anyway, thanks for the compliments on the vox and instrumentation, much appreciated, as well as the favoriting.
be well.

[Dog N Bone]

cool

Really, nice! I like it!